Practice 1 Learn Cycling

 Jeremy was told to read a model composition once and then covered the model composition and write his own one(both copying by memory and self-creating are allowed).




own one:

Learn Cycling

It was a brilliant Sunday morning. The sky was cloudless and there was A gentle breeze. The air is crisp and cool. Jon was like A dog with two tails as his dad was going to teach him cycling in the neighbourhood park.

Jon'S dad got holding firmly on the bars of the bicycle while Jon put his feet on the pedal. Jon had got a cold feet. He was afraid of falling off from the bike. In a patient gentle tone, Jon'S dad consoled him and told him to keep balanced and pedal as hard as he could.

Biting the bullet, Jon started to pedal. Before he was even aware of, Jon was sailing down the path at full speed. Jon'S dad was beaming from ear to ear. A sense of accomplishment crept up to Jon'S head. Jon'S dad wad in seventh heaven. As A reward, Jon'S father took him to McDonald for his favourite breakfast.






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